Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Scenes 9&10, The Moor and Free at Last

CUT TO:

INT. YEAR 11 CLASSROOM – DAY

Hana is sitting on her desk as the kids in her class come up to congratulate her on her performance. MATT, the class clown, grins at her, DAISY, seventeen, hugs her.

                        DAISY
              Han-NA your voice is so nice! You were
              incredible.

                        HANA
              Thanks Daisy.

                        CLEO
                   (Proudly)
              Yeah, my mum said you were fantastic.

                        MATT
                   (Teasing)
              What, you didn’t go, Clo?

                        CLEO
                   (Defensively)
              I was studying. Anyways I’m not the only one
              who didn’t go.

                        MATT
                   (Shoots a glance at Will)
              Will doesn’t count, he never goes to church.

Hana, touching her necklace, looks at Will, who is leaning back nonchalantly on his chair.

                        WILL
              So? It’s called freedom of belief, and I
              choose not to believe.

                        MATT
              Don’t care what you believe in Will. All I’m
              saying is, atheists don’t count.

                        CLEO
                   (Reproachfully)
              Don’t call him an atheist, Matt!

                        WILL
              I am an atheist.

                        CLEO
              Yeah, but …

                        MATT
              He is an atheist, Clee.

                        CLEO
              Fine, it’s just not … polite.

                        WILL
              It’s not rude, either.

                        CLEO
                   (Feeling victimised)
              Okay, fine, I’m always wrong.

                        HANA
              Come on Cleo. Boys are just mean.

                        MATT
              Oi!

                        WILL
                   (Laughs)
              Fair enough.

Emma enters the classroom and everyone grudgingly moves back to their own seats. They begin to take out their books.

                        EMMA
              Uh – wait a second please. You won’t need
              your books for a bit. Here – take a slip of
              paper.

Emma walks around the room and hands out thin slips of paper to each student. They look at their pieces of paper and then at one another with confusion. Emma retakes her place at the front of the class.

                        EMMA
                   (Cont’d)
              I have a challenge for you all.

The class groans.
                  
                        MATT
              Aw, Miss, your challenges suck.

                        EMMA
              Ouch.

                        MATT
              Sorry, it’s true.

                        EMMA
              Well, Matt, this one isn’t. Basically, I
              want you all to try and make a one-sided
              shape with this slip of paper. You have five
              minutes.

Hana wrinkles her nose and stares at the piece of paper. She tries to crumple it up into a ball but the ball has about a thousand sides. She flattens it out again and smoothes it with her hands, trying to look like she knows what she’s doing. She peaks over at Will next to her.

                        WILL
              Hey, no cheating.

                        HANA
                   (Defensively)
              I wasn’t!

Will raises his eyebrows at her.

                        HANA
                   (Cont’d)
              Okay fine, I was. I have no idea what to do,
              that’s all.

                        WILL
              Ah, so now the atheist has all the answers?

                        HANA
              That’s not fair, I don’t care that you
              aren’t religious.

                        EMMA
              Quiet, please, Hana.

                        WILL
                   (Whispers)
              I know you don’t.

                        HANA
                   (Whispers)
              Do you care that I’m Christian?

                        WILL
                   (Whispers)
              It’s not my place to care.

                        HANA
                   (Whispers)
              Okay then, will you help me?

                        WILL
                   (Grins)
              Here.

Will loops the piece of paper around her wrist and puts a single twist in it. He sticks the two ends together with tape. Hana looks down at where Will’s hand lingers on her wrist, before he pulls away.

                        WILL
                   (Cont’d)
              There.

                        HANA
              Are you sure?
             
                        WILL
              One side. Count it.

Will puts a permanent marker dot on one side of the paper. Hana puts her finger on the dot and traces along the outside of the bracelet. Will looks in her eyes as she does it, and when her finger reaches back to the dot, she looks up in surprise and he looks quickly away.

                        HANA
                   (Surprised)
              It works!

                        WILL
              Of course it does.

                        EMMA
              You two are finished, then, I take it?

                        HANA
              Yep.

                        EMMA
              Alright, everyone stop.

As the class frustratedly put down their attempts at a one-sided object, Emma walks up to Hana and takes a look at the bracelet around her wrist.

                        EMMA
                   (Cont’d)
              Very good. Okay, everyone see how Hana has
              twisted the paper? It looks like a two-sided
              object but is, indeed, one. The art of
              deception; things are not what they seem.
              And with that in mind, let’s start our unit
              on Othello.

The class looks cheated and begin to grumble and complain.

                        MATT
              What a waste of time! What has paper got to
              do with bloody Shakespeare?

                        WILL
              He wrote on it, for one.

                        MATT
                   (Sarcastically)
              Oh, nice one William.

                        EMMA
              Okay, okay! Please come up and get your
              books. 

The class move to collect their copies of Othello but Hana pauses to touch the paper bracelet around her wrist. She smiles softly and gets up. With the books they sit back down and begin to read. Will reads the part of Iago.

                       
                        EMMA
              Open to Act 1, Scene 3, Line 381. Will, can
              you read, please?

                        WILL
                   (Grudgingly)
              Fine.

                        EMMA
              Now, remember that Othello is an
              Aristotelian tragedy – the protagonist has a
              fatal flaw. In Iago’s first soliloquy, he
              points out what we might suggest is
              Othello’s fatal flaw. Will?

                        WILL
                   (Reading)
              The Moor is of a free and open nature,
              That thinks men honest that but seem to be
              so,
              And will as tenderly be led by the nose
              As asses are.
              I have’t. It is engendered. Hell and night
              Must bring this monstrous birth to the
              world’s light.
    
The bell rings. Hana and Will stand up and walk out of the classroom together.

                        EMMA
                   (Shouting as the class leave)
              Bring your text tomorrow; we’ll read from
              the very beginning. No homework this
              afternoon!

                        HANA
              You were a pretty good Iago, Will. Not
              nearly evil enough though.

                        WILL
              I’ll take that as a compliment.

                                                CUT TO:

EXT. AMERY HIGH SCHOOL – DAY

It is mid-afternoon and the sun is low but warm. Hana and Will leave through the front gate together.

                        HANA
              Free at last!

                        WILL
              Thank God.

They laugh and walk off together. Cleo walks out of the gate after them, trying to catch up. She sees Will catch Hana’s hand in his and then stops. A year twelve student crashes into her back and spills coffee on her.

                        STUDENT
              Hey, watch it!

                        CLEO
              Sorry! S-sorry.

Cleo turns the other way and walks down the street in the opposite direction, doing nothing to prevent the lukewarm coffee soaking into her top.

                                           FADE TO BLACK

2 comments:

  1. :O ahhhh cleo!!
    haha but you just had to put in Othello...
    :P

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  2. ooh i just realised the 'paper bracelet'!!
    smart girl :)

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